In more sophisticated essays, the thesis is often implicit (suggested) rather than explicit (directly stated), and the reader may have to piece it together from various statements, the essay’s context, and clues provided by the writer throughout the essay, often in the form of rhetorical devices. Although more sophisticated essays are no formulaic, like the five-paragraph essay, they still have a clearly discernable structure, are well organized, exhibit unity and coherence, and support and develop one or more points using specific evidence.
If there is no “right” way to write an essay, one may wonder how it is possible to evaluate an essay. This is an issue that William Zinsser addresses in his own essay, “The Act of Writing: One Man’s Method,” which appears on pages 159-165 of Text Messages: The author compares himself as a writer to a bricklayer, implying that writing is in some ways like bricklaying: “I’m somewhat like a bricklayer. I build very slowly, not adding a new row until I feel that the foundation is solid enough to hold up the house” (160). This comparison shows how carefully the writer is in developing his essay and how seriously he takes his craft.
The questions, “worries,” desires, and imperative statements that Zinsser mentions indicate his criteria for writing:
I want. . . the design that my piece will have. . . . to have rhythm and pace that will invite the reader to keep reading (161).He says he edits several times, “mostly,” during later revisions, “cutting” unnecessary words (and sentences): “words were eliminated because I saw that they were unnecessary,” he says, advising other writers to
Learn to recognize what is clutter and to use the DELETE key to prune it out.He offers his readers examples of such “clutter”:
The useless proposition y=that gets appended to so many verbs (order up, free up), or the adverb whose meaning is already in the verb (blare loudly, clench tightly), or the adjective that tells us what we already know (smooth marble, green grass). . . . phrases in which the writer explains what he is about to explain (it might be pointed out, I’m tempted to say). . . . the sentence that essentially repeats what the previous sentence has said, or tells the reader something that is implicit, or adds a detail that is irrelevant (162).Another criterion for good writing that Zinsser identifies is clarity, which, he indicates, results from concise wording: “Writing is clear and strong to the extent that it has no superfluous parts” (162).
- Clarity (clearness)
- Continuity (interconnectedness of parts)
- Design that shows rhythm and pace
- Elimination of unnecessary words
- Adoption of more precise or vivid words in place of less precise or vivid ones
- Use of active instead of passive verbs
- Unity through the consistent use of tone, point of view, pronouns, tense and through the inclusion of transitions
- Use of short sentences, each of which contains only one thought
In “Don’t You Think It’s Time to Start Thinking” (pages 170-172 in Text Messages), Northrop Frye identifies several obstacles to good writing that should be avoided, including gobbledygook, jargon, cant, doublespeak, the vocabulary of groupthink, weasel words, “prejudices and clichés”. Of course, writers should also avoid sexist and racist terminology and should remember that illiteracy includes images and figures of speech and is not limited only to one’s use of words. The use of such “ready-made phrases” (171) and “verbal formulas that have no thought behind them” (172), Frye argues, leads to unthinking obedience, social conformity, manipulation of others, and social subjugation.
Find a subject you care about (173).Do no ramble (173).Simplicity of language is. . . reputable (173).If a sentence, no matter how excellent, does not illuminate my subject in some new and useful way, scratch it out (173).[Use a] writing style which is. . . natural (173).Write accurately, always selecting the most effective words, and relating the words to one another unambiguously (174).
Vonnegut also urges other writers to punctuate correctly and to use traditional , standard grammar, declaring, “readers. . . want our pages to look very much like pages they have seen before” (174).
If a writer finds him- or herself under the required length lim(186-190)it for an essay, rather than padding what he or she has already written, Roberts argues, he or she should “dig up more real content” in order to further “illustrate” his or her essay’s topic (185). The writer may ask and answer questions about the topic in order to further identify and explore the topic’s implications.
- “Excessive timidity” (a writer, he suggests, should “decide what you want to say and say it as vigorously as possible, without apology and in plain words”)
- “Linguistic diffidence,” one form of which is the euphemism, which “always operates more or less in subjects that are touchy or taboo”
- “Polysyllables” instead of short words
- “Pat expressions,” which he defines as “tags” or “clichés” such as “the pure and simple truth,” “from where I sit,” “the time of his life,” “to the ends of the earth,” “in the twinkling of an eye,” “as sure as you’re born,” “over my dead body”
- “Colorful words” that “are calculated to produce a picture or induce an emotion” (in other words, purple prose or connotative language)
- “Colorless words,” which “are. . . of such general meaning that in a particular sentence they mean nothing,” such as “slang adjectives like cool”
- “Nouns of very general meaning, like circumstances, cases, instances, aspects, factors, relationships, attitudes, eventualities” (1860190).